During the summer I go to Six Flags a lot because it is my favorite place in the world. There is a really tall ride there called "
Acrophobia." It is called Acrophobia because it is the tallest ride that usually people are too scared to go on because of their fear of heights.
"Six Flags" needs to be capitalized because it is a proper noun, rather than a common noun.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you incorporated the ride in your story and it also had one of our vocab words for its name.
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